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Narrative/Memoir


                   ENG 111
                   Unit One
Narratives
• Narratives are stories that are told for
  different purposes.

• In college, students will be asked to relate
  their experiences dealing with different
  matters. There is also the narrative
  required on the college application.
Memoirs
• Memoirs focus on events, people, and
  places that are important.

• One usually writes a memoir to capture
  the important moment and to tell how it is
  important to him/her.
Key Features
• A well-told story: Like most stories, those
  about literacy often set up some sort of
  situation that needs to be resolved or a
  question to be answered.
• Vivid detail: Vivid details are what bring a
  story to life and help create the mental
  images of sights, sounds, smells, tastes,
  and textures of the world in which the story
  takes place.
Key Features Continued
• Indication of narratives significance: A
  literacy narrative tells something about
  how the person learned to read or write.
  The writer must also make it clear why the
  event is important. A sort of moral of the
  story, if you will.
  – A memoir tells about the significance of the
    memory, while explaining what it means to the
    writer.
Choosing a Topic
• Focus on the simple events during a brief
  period:
  – Any earlier memory about reading or writing
  – Someone who taught you to read or write
  – A book that is significant to you
  – An event at school that was interesting,
    humorous, or embarrassing, etc.
  – A memory you will never forget
• Make a possible list of topics and choose
  one that you feel is interesting.
Considering the Rhetorical
            Situation
• Purpose: Why do you want to tell the
  story? Think about the reasons and how
  they will shape what you write.
• Audience: Who are your readers?
  Understanding your audience lets you
  know what you need to explain, if there
  would be similar experiences, and if they
  share your attitude.
Rhetorical Situation Cont.
• Stance: What attitude do you want to
  project? The attitude will determine the
  tone you use when writing.
• Media/Design: How will be the narrative be
  presented? There is print, oral, and web.,
  and then there are photos, charts, or other
  illustrations that may be needed.
Generating Ideas and Text
• Remember that the goal is to tell a story
  that is vivid and compelling for the reader.
  – Describe the setting: Where does it take
    place? What do you see? What do you hear?
    What do you smell? How and what do you
    feel? What do you taste?
  – Think of key people: People’s actions play an
    important part in the story. Describe each
    person in a paragraph or so. Recall (or
    imagine) some characteristic dialogue.
Generating Ideas and Text
              Cont.
• Write about ―what happened‖: A good
  story dramatizes the action. Try to
  summarize what happened with active and
  specific verbs to describe as vividly as
  possible. Answer what, where, and who.
• Consider the significance of the narrative:
  Be clear about why the event is important.
  How did it change or affect you?
Ways to Organize
• Start by Outlining the main events. Then
  think about how you want to organize it.
  – Chronologically: from beginning to end
  – Beginning in the middle: start with the middle,
    fill in details, tell how situation was resolved,
    and why it was important.
  – Beginning at the end: tell how the story ends
    and then go back to the beginning to tell how
    it happened.
Writing Out a Draft
• Once all the information is collected, it is
  time to begin writing.

  – Draft a beginning: jump right in with the main
    action; describe the context by giving
    background information; describe the
    setting—especially if it is important to the
    narrative.
Writing Out a Draft Cont.
– Draft an ending: what do you want to leave
  the readers with.
  • End where your story ends
  • Say something about the significance of your
    narrative
  • Refer back to the beginning
  • End on a surprising note
– Come up with a title.
  • A good title indicates something about subject and
    makes the audience want to read the narrative.
Considering Matters of Design
Narratives are usually written in paragraph
form.
– What typeface? Essays are usually Times
  New Roman, Arial, or Calibri.
– Any headings? Essays have a header with
  your name, teacher’s name, class, and date.
– Any visuals? Short essays usually do not
  included visuals.
Getting Response and Revising
• Getting responses from others is really
  important.
  – Does the title and beginning make the reader
    want to read more?
  – Are transitions used correctly to take the
    reader through the story?
  – Is anything confusing?
  – Are the details added and are the interesting?
    Does the reader know the setting? Is there
    dialogue?
Getting Response and Revising
            Cont.
 – Has the situation been made meaningful?
 – Are actions described vividly and clearly as to
   engage the reader?
 – Is the significance clear?
 – Is the ending satisfying and what does it leave
   the reader thinking?
 Once you have all the answers, it is time to
 revise.
Editing and Proofreading
• Make sure events are narrated in clear
  order with proper transitions.
• Make sure to have verb tense consistency.
• Make sure verb tenses indicate when an
  action took place.
• Punctuate dialogue correctly.
• Proofread for other grammatical and
  usage issues.
Taking Stock in Your Work
• How well did you tell the story?
• What did you do well?
• What could you improve?
• How did you come up with ideas and
  generating texts?
• How did you go about drafting the
  narrative?
• How did others’ responses influence you?